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The sound of catamarans upon the foam,
the march of cavalry and weary knights
who lay their bodies down are coming home
to linens drying like a hundred kites;
if not for love, what force are sword and chain
that they may honor empires with their call,
if not for me, they all have died in vain
and made of Troy the laughingstock for all.
Indeed, your chamois shirts and littered socks,
the tender cartilage of tambourines,
unfinished wine, and little jew'llery box,
and dual hemispheres of nectarines—
belong to me alone in my design:
the air you breathe, your everything, is mine.
All poetry is love poetry.

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This poem was really about a different side of love, a side that sometimes is easy to miss. Everything that we do and touch, that we feel and hear, that we fight for, is because we hold something or someone dear to us.

Aphrodite is the most well known symbol of love there is, and giving her a possessive tone conveys the idea that there is nothing apart from all that she stands for.

EDIT: WAIT WHAT?! DD? ARE YOU KIDDING ME? PARWIOTHSDFPIOBHEAWRPHBSFIUIBEAWPRBNSDFGKJHQERPUINVAER THANK YOU!!
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Aphrodite's Dissertation is breathtaking rhythm and rhyme from ~ThroneLiesFallow ( Suggested by AzizrianDaoXrak and Featured by Nichrysalis )
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Karinta Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Student General Artist
HOLY SHIT! A sonnet? I don't see that every day, especially one that rhymes knights/kites and tambourines/nectarines. Brilliant job. Absolutely brilliant. :D
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ThroneLiesFallow Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you kindly! It was a lot of fun figuring out the rhymes hehe. Glad you approve.
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Karinta Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student General Artist
:huggle: It's wonderful! You're very welcome.
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Parsat Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student Writer
Whoa, this happened while I was in Taiwan? Sweetness...very well deserved for you. :)
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ThroneLiesFallow Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha thank you! It took me by surprise as well. :P
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
    Congrats on the DD! :dalove:
    Have a nice day! :heart:
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ThroneLiesFallow Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
    My pleasure :happybounce:
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JeffreyRebowlski Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This flows really nicely

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MomoMarie28 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013
It was beautiful!!! Made me cry. Congratulations honey! <3 Thank you for sharing!
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